NaPoWriMo 2011 Poem & Prompts for April 11, 2011 11/30April 11, 2011
April 11, 2011
Day 11…. Hopefully you continue to write and challenge yourself every day.
Feel free to use either, both or none of the prompts suggested. There are several other places on web and several other people who are offering up prompts and idea to get you to write as well.
Today’s subject prompt: write about something missed
Today’s form: elegy details below
Behind these doors
Once resided a magical place
where time stood still, thousands
of adventures held their breaths
waiting for browsers to unlock
their secrets expose their stories
sip the words off the pages; silenced
now; The shelves and gathering places
where wordsmiths once recited,
excited audiences now like field
after last autumn harvest on new moon night.
Why lift the weight of book
Touch the old words
When they can appear on screen
While I simultaneously text and
listen to music, conveniently, multi-task?
Keyboard gatherings discuss on screen
Look ahead, not in hand
Cameras tell the stories now.
This place will soon be dress shop, shoe store
And time will forget curmudgeon bookseller who
growled at giggling teenage lovers stealing kisses
amongst the bookshelves.
In literature, an elegy is a mournful, melancholic or plaintive poem, especially a funeral song or a lament for the dead.
The elegy began as an ancient Greek metrical form and is traditionally written in response to the death of a person or group. Though similar in function, the elegy is distinct from the epitaph, ode, and eulogy: the epitaph is very brief; the ode solely exalts; and the eulogy is most often written in formal prose.
The elements of a traditional elegy mirror three stages of loss. First, there is a lament, where the speaker expresses grief and sorrow, then praise and admiration of the idealized dead, and finally consolation and solace. These three stages can be seen in W. H. Auden’s classic “In Memory of W. B. Yeats,” written for the Irish master, which includes these stanzas:
With the farming of a verse
Make a vineyard of the curse,
Sing of human unsuccess
In a rapture of distress;
In the deserts of the heart
Let the healing fountain start,
In the prison of his days
Teach the free man how to praise.
Other well-known elegies include “Fugue of Death” by Paul Celan, written for victims of the Holocaust, and “O Captain! My Captain!” by Walt Whitman, written for President Abraham Lincoln.
Many modern elegies have been written not out of a sense of personal grief, but rather a broad feeling of loss and metaphysical sadness. A famous example is the mournful series of ten poems in Duino Elegies, by German poet Rainer Maria Rilke. The first poem begins:
If I cried out
who would hear me up there
among the angelic orders?
And suppose one suddenly
took me to his heart
I would shrivel
Other works that can be considered elegiac in the broader sense are James Merrill’s monumental The Changing Light at Sandover, Robert Lowell’s “For the Union Dead,” Seamus Heaney’s The Haw Lantern, and the work of Czeslaw Milosz, which often laments the modern cruelties he witnessed in Europe.